Thursday, 23 September 2010

Possible Headlines

These are some of my ideas for Headlines to go into my Newspaper.
The Coloured Green Headlines are the stories I decided to pick, while the Red Coloured Headlines are ones I decided against:
  • Library Set To Make A Move
  • Library Set For A Change
  • Community Gather Together For Cancer Appeal
  • Annual Fete Is Big Hit With Locals
  • New Harry Potter Film Shown at Local Cinema
  • New Harry Potter Film Casts A Spell Over Local Cinema
  • Police Capture Mass Graffiti Artist
  • Campaign For More Seating Goes Ahead Around the Area
  • Campaign For More Parking Goes Ahead
Due to the Fact that they are initial ideas - some of the Headlines varied to get the reader's attention. These are my Final Headlines:
  • Library to make a move for the better (Front Cover)
  • Library is nearly here; only one more week (Inside Cover)
  • Fayre goes down a 'Storm' (Front Cover)
  • Locals celebrate fayre despite the bad weather (Inside Cover)
  • New Harry Potter movie casts a spell on local cinema (Short Story - Inside Cover)
  • The long fight for new car parking has been won (Short Story - Inside Cover)

Monday, 20 September 2010

Inside Layout Initial Idea (2)


If this design came from any newspaper it was definitely inspired by the Mercury but with less pictures and adverts. I think at this moment in time I was almost set on committing to the other drafted design but I decided to keep my options open and to explore more ideas so I created this one. After designing it, I found that it was far too busy and similar to my front page with the boxed story/headline in the same position.

Inside Layout Initial Idea (1)


This particular layout I have designed reflected that of The Evening Post. When design I found I really liked the newspaper layout and convention as everything was was arranged neatly and clearly for the reader. I did changed some elements such as the bottom right sections by adding in a few more pictures as the Evening Post's inside page didn't have enough images for my liking- it was very text heavy. However, I loved and was set on doing the column of stories down the side as it has been a convention of newspapers that I have come to expect and appreciate over the years of viewing newspapers.

Initial Idea for Front Cover (3)


The element of local newspaper I used in the construction of this drafted design are as followed:
  • The advert in the bottom left is inspired by the Mercury newspaper
  • While the boxed image and story are inspired by the Times, also the other headline position is also influenced by the Times newspaper.
  • By my third drafted design, I knew that my final design was going to consist of the newsline, advertising number and the website situated at the bottom of the page. I found it made the paper look professional and encouraged readers to call in and comment etc.
  • The masthead and the adverts at the top of the page were inspired by the Evening Post's design. Also, I added in the stars as does the Evening Post which shows the tradition/ history of the newspaper.

I did like this design however I found that it bordered the lines of looking like a tabloid newspaper rather than a local (humble, community style) newspaper. I found that this design was suitable but not what I was looking for when considering what to make.

Initial Idea for Front Cover (2)


Elements used from local newspapers I have looked at:
  • The bottom right hand advert came from the Evening Post
  • While the newsline, advertising number and email at the bottom of the page comes from the Times newspaper - I believe this makes a newspaper look more professional
  • I also added in the places you could buy the newspaper similar to that of the Mercury and the Times.
  • The number of pictures was also inspired by the The Times newspaper as when analysing I found it to be more appropriate and tidier in it's layout.
  • By adding a slogan, it reflected the Evening Post
  • Later on in the design process I decided on adding in a logo of a blackberry similar to what both the Evening Post and the Mercury have.
This idea was by far my favourite as I feel the spacing and the layout fitted perfectly and reflected a real local newspaper. I also felt I could work with it better in the actual process of constructing it as it was the one I preferred.

Intial Idea for Front Cover (1)


This Idea has been constructed from a mixture of the three newspapers I have looked at through my research:
  • The three adverts at the bottom of the page and the line dividing the adverts from the main story reflect that of The Times Newsapaper
  • While the Mast head is similair to the Mercury as it stretches across the page accompianied by the logo
  • The main headline and the boxed story/image are ideas from a combination of the Mercury and the Times

This idea is pretty simplistic and doesn't have enough features on it that may make it look more professional and conventional of a real media newspaper. If I were to improve this, I would consider filling the page with more images and perhaps moving the adverts around.

Newspaper Inside Page Layouts




Features seen on the inside covers:
The Evening Post:

  • Caption - who's in the picture, age and where it is shot - who, what, where, why etc. for example: Sam Rogers 6 and tom Anderson 13, winners of the first golden Morphs award @ Bristol Explore presented by Richard Williams (Who Framed Roger Rabbit) and Donna Speed (Competition winner)
  • column of stoies on the left hand side approximately three stories.
  • One image, more focus on stories
  • six stories on one page.
  • Evening post website, top left
  • Date top right
  • who took the picture is also featured and where you can order the picture.

I like the layout of the stories especially the left hand column. Perhaps I would add another picture and an advert as I believe there are too many stories all on one page.

The Mercury:

  • Captions under/ alongside pictures
  • top left corner - name of newspaper and then date
  • top right cormer - website address
  • One large advert bottom left of the page
  • Two images
  • Community stories in a blue rimmed box
  • Maximum two to three columns for each story
  • approximately three stories per page

Again, I like the layout and there is the right amount of pictures : text

The Times:

  • website address -top left hand corner
  • date - middle top of page
  • page number - top right hand corner
  • seven adverts on one page near bottom and up the sides but I think that it may vary between pages
  • three images near top of page
  • approximately three stories per page
  • Red line separting the two headlines

I like the layout at the top of the page as it is more conventional but I do feel that it has too many adverts which ultimately make it feel cluttered.